Friday, 6 December 2013
My thought's so far on the book
So far I really like this book, I really like how it's actually in the persepective with a person with autism. I find it really interesting learning how they act or feel when certain things happen and how they think. I find it really interesting how when there are four red cars in a row it is a good and and if there are three yellow cars in a row it's a bad day and he talks to no one and just reads. I also find it cool how the chapters in the book are only prime numbers. This book is really fascinating on the perspective and what he talks about in the book. I really enjoy reading this book, I haven't read anything quite like it. I was really sad that the dog died right at the beginning of the story, it's always a dog. I love dogs so much so that was sad. I'm curious what happened to Wellington and who did it. I'm really glad we are reading this book for English instead of some really boring book. I am really curious in what else is going to happen in the rest of the story and what will happen with Wellington, I can't wait to read more.
Thursday, 28 November 2013
Social media bullying
Two girls, a 12 and 14-year-old, were arrested in a Florida bullying case after one of them admitted online over the weekend that she harassed a 12-year-old girl who killed herself last month, a sheriff said Tuesday. (Oct. 15) AP
Doug Stanglin and William M. Welch, USA TODAY8:11 a.m. EDT October 16, 2013
Sheriff says he made arrests after one suspect posted on Facebook that she didn't care the victim had died.
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Florida officials have charged two girls, ages 12 and 14, with felonies for allegedly taunting and bullying another 12-year-old girl until she committed suicide.
Such criminal charges are extremely rare, although the problem of bullying and victimizing other teens is an age-old one.
Polk County Sheriff Grady Judd said Tuesday that he made the arrests Monday after one of the two girls posted on Facebook as recently as Saturday that she had bullied the victim, Rebecca Sedwick of Lakeland, Fla., and didn't care that she had died.
Rebecca, who killed herself Sept. 9 by jumping off a cement factory tower, was "terrorized" by as many as 15 girls who picked on her for months through online message boards and texts, according to authorities in Lakeland, Fla. One message said she should "drink bleach and die.''
The online harassment allegedly continued after she transferred to a different school.
Experts who have studied social aggression in teens, including bullying via the Internet, say such harassment is a widespread problem that has gained increased attention in the digital age, when written threats and taunts live indefinitely online.
About one-fifth of all teens report having experienced cyberbullying, says Justin Patchin, professor of criminal justice at the University of Wisconsin-Eau Claire and co-director of the Cyberbullying Research Center. He said the actions in the Florida case were extreme because of the length of the harassment, the number of teens involved and the seriousness of their postings.
"It is generally very rare for criminal charges to be filed against teens for these kinds of behaviors,'' Patchin said. "Kids have been bullying each other for generations. ... What makes it different is the long-standing nature, the permanent nature of statements online.''
Rosalind Wiseman, a Washington, D.C., author of two books on teen bullying, including a new one about boys titled Masterminds and Wingmen, said the relentlessness of cyberbullying can make teens feel isolated and miserable.
"Because it is so public, it makes everyone feel like it's happening all the time,'' she said. "The thing that makes the victims feel desperately miserable is the feeling the entire community is ganging up on them and nobody is coming to their side.''
Though bullying is as old as classrooms, only in the past decade or so have states moved to address with legislation what once was simply the domain of schools. In 1999, only Georgia had an anti-bullying law. Now every state but Montana does. In the past 14 years, states have enacted nearly 130 anti-bullying measures, half of them since 2008.
Spurred partly by the Columbine shootings in 1999, when news accounts suggested the perpetrators had been bullied, states began rapidly addressing bullying, a 2011 U.S. Department of Education report found. Eighteen states have laws that allow victims to seek legal remedies, either from schools that don't act or from the bullies themselves
The suspects were charged as juveniles with aggravated stalking, a third-degree felony, according to the Polk County sheriff's office.
"Bullying in and of itself is not a crime. But bullying makes up the predicate acts for stalking or aggravated stalking," Judd said.
If found guilty, it's not clear how much time, if any, the girls would spend in juvenile detention because they did not have any previous criminal history, the sheriff said.
The judge in the case remanded the 14-year-old girl into the custody of juvenile authorities, the sheriff's office said in a statement. The 12-year-old, described as a one-time friend of Rebecca's, was released into her parents custody "due to her remorse and cooperation." She will not be allowed to attend school, the statement said.
Ludd said a feud had erupted after the 14-year-old suspect began dating a boy Rebecca had been seeing. She "began to harass and ultimately torment Rebecca," Judd said.
The sheriff said the 14-year-old was "very cold, had no emotion at all upon her arrest." The second suspect was once the victim's best friend.
Judd said that the pair were the main culprits, but that the investigation continues into the possible involvement of other girls.
The sheriff said the tipping point leading to the arrests came when one of the suspects purportedly showed a lack of remorse for Rebecca's death by allegedly posting on Facebook on Saturday: "Yes ik [I know] I bullied REBECCA nd she killed her self but IDGAF [I don't give a (expletive)]"
The suspect told deputies that her Facebook account was hacked and that she did not write that post, WTSP-TV reported.
The sheriff's office says that in interviews with detectives, the 12-year-old suspect "admitted that she 'bullied' Rebecca and said she was sorry.
Judd said police decided to make the arrests out of concern that the girls would pick a new victim.
"We decided, look, we can't leave her out there," Judd said. "Who else is she going to torment? Who else is she going to harass? Who is the next person she verbally and mentally abuses and attacks?"
He said the parents did not cooperate, would not take them to the police and would not stop their daughters' use of social media.
A man who answered the phone at the 14-year-old suspect's Lakeland home told the Associated Press that he was her father and said that "none of it's true."
"My daughter's a good girl, and I'm 100% sure that whatever they're saying about my daughter is not true," he said.
A message left at the 12-year-old girl's home was not immediately returned, the AP said.
Rebecca's mother, Tricia Norman, told WTSP last month that the constant bullying drove her daughter to kill herself, and that the school district did not do enough to protect her.
"They would tell her she's ugly, stupid, nobody liked her, go kill herself," said Norman, who launched an anti-bullying campaign Rebecca Sedwich — Against Bullying, on Facebook.
Rebecca ran away in November and was hospitalized the following month for three days after cutting herself. At one point, the school stepped in to separate the girls' schedules because of fights. Rebecca later changed schools, but the bullying continued online, on sites such as Ask.fm, Kik, Instagram and Voxer, authorities said.
Judd said that on the morning of Sept. 9, Rebecca texted a boy she had met online from the cement tower, saying she couldn't take it anymore and she was jumping.
Judd said the "red flags" for possible suicide were there. On her computer, police found search queries for topics including "what is overweight for a 13-year-old girl," ''how to get blades out of razors" and "how many over-the-counter drugs do you take to die." One of her screensavers also showed Rebecca with her head resting on a railroad track.
Florida has a bullying law named after Jeffrey Johnson, a teenage "techno geek" who was bullied for two years before hanging himself in his closet at age15. Amended July 1 to cover cyberbullying, the law leaves punishment to schools, but law enforcement also can seek more traditional charges.
Contributing: Greg Toppo, USA TODAY; The Associated Press
Tuesday, 19 November 2013
Billy Joel - Pressure
You have to learn to pace yourself
Pressure
You're just like everybody else
Pressure
You've only had to run so far
So good
But you will come to a place
Where the only thing you feel
Are loaded guns in your face
And you'll have to deal with
Pressure
You used to call me paranoid
Pressure
But even you can not avoid
Pressure
You turned the tap dance into your crusade
Now here you are with your faith
And your Peter Pan advice
You have no scars on your face
And you cannot handle pressure
All grown up and no place to go
Psych 1, Psych 2
What do you know?
All your life is Channel 13
Sesame Street
What does it mean?
Pressure
Pressure
Don't ask for help
You're all alone
Pressure
You'll have to answer
To your own
Pressure
I'm sure you'll have some cosmic rationale
But here you are in the ninth
Two men out and three men on
Nowhere to look but inside
Where we all respond to
Pressure
Pressure
All your life is Time magazine
I read it too
What does it mean?
Pressure
I'm sure you'll have some cosmic rationale
But here you are with your faith
And your Peter Pan advice
You have no scars on your face
And you cannot handle pressure
Pressure, pressure
One, two, three, four
Pressure
These lyrics are from the website "Songmeanings.com"
Friday, 15 November 2013
Is Romeo and Juliet's love for each other real or lust?
Romeo and Juliet is considered one of the greatest love stories of all time. The debate with Romeo and Juliet was if there love for each other was love or lust. There are so many different opinions on this topic that there really is no right or wrong answer. Many people have different opinions on this. Some think their love is true love while others feel what they had was based on lust. Love can have a different defenition for everyone, because everyone defines love differently. It all really depends on the individual and their perception of what love really means. Many people think that Juliet and Romeo committing suicide for each other was a true expression of their love for each other, while many people think differently. There are thousands of essays and opinions on this very famous story, and on all these topics regarding whether or not their story was based on love or lust.
Romeo was very depressed when discovered that Rosaline didn't like him. When Mercutio took him to the Capulet party, and right when he saw Juliet, he seemed to dismiss Rosaline. Romeo seemed to be superficial in that he seemed to only care about what the girl looked like, and that's what drew him to Juliet. How does one be so depressed over a break up with someone they seemed infatuated with then see someone else and only because they're good looking get over it so quickly? Romeo didn't really love Juliet, he just liked her because she was better looking then Rosaline. In the beginning of the story, Romeo is walking around acting all depressed saying page 22 lines 56-58 "Not mad, but bound more than a madman is. Shut up in prison, kept without my food", page 27 lines 25 and 26 " Is love a tender thing? It is too rough, Too rude, too boisterous, and pricks like a thorn". Romeo was very upset and depressed over Rosaline, when Mercutio convinced him to go to the Capulet party he only went because he thought Roslaine would be there. He goes from being depressed, and goes to that party to find Rosaline, and right when he see's the next pretty girl he's over her. That doesn't say much about Romeo's perception of love. Their love for each other was lust no doubt about it, but they both really did like each other. It just wasn't true love.
Love is one of the strongest emotions a person can have. We all can define love in our own unique way, but love is surely not to be taken lightly or made to be trivial. Some people define love as how much they love their car, while some people define love by how they love their family. Depending on the individual love can be seen as very shallow or very deep. Love is different for everybody. People can also reserve love for special persons or particular objects that mean a lot to them. Beauty and love both are in the eye of the beholder, and how one person might view a person or thing can be totally different for another person seeing the same thing. Where it can mean everything to one person, it also can mean little or nothing to another. Love can be defined by a feeling one person has for the other, in that they care more about the other person than they do for themselves. Their love can be so strong in fact, that they aren't able to cope living without their true love. Love is also an intoxicating emotion that can sometimes cause a person to become love sick, which Romeo was. Love is basically a strong, endearing emotion someone feels for another person or thing.
In conclusion we can define love by our own perspective. There are many different kinds of love in this world, and love is different for everyone. One person's definition of love can be completely different from another. There is love for people, or it can be material things. It can vary from person to person. Some people love there pets, animals, spouse, family, there are lots of different things people can love. People see love differently from another and it can mean very different things to different people. Different kinds of love can be more valuable then the other depending on the person. It's a different kind of love for an animal and human, both are valuable but in some cases both can be more valuable then the other. Lots of people do love there animal like humans, and lots of people love humans more then animals. Family is a very special and valuable kind of love, family should always come first, family is forever. Love for an animal is very valuableł also, but love for animal is a different kind of love then for a human. It's a special kind of love for animals. There are lots of different kinds of love, it means something different to everyone. It can be very valuable to one person and mean nothing to another. Love is a very valuable thing but lots of people don't have love in their life and don't realize how special and valuable it is.
Romeo and Juliet were crazy for each other, and they were both very love sick. Commiting suicide for each other is not romantic at all, it's very stupid in fact. Romeo was very vunerable to becoming love sick, and so was Juliet. They were both young and didn't make the smartest choices. They both really liked each other but it was lust, it couldn't possibly be true love, they only knew each other for a few days before they got married, and Romeo was all upset over Rosaline not liking him. They both did believe that they loved each other but that's not enough time at all. They were both young and immature, and they killed themselves for each other thinking that they were deeply in love and couldn't live without the other. It's all very surreal. In the middle perhaps it's romantic but you should never ever ever kill yourself, especially if it's over someone you met a few days prior. They both didn't know what love meant but no doubt they did like each other it just wasn't love.
Romeo and Juliet liked each other a lot so much so that they killed themselves. There are so many debates and opinions if there love was real or not there is no right or wrong answer. There love for each other was lust not true love. Romeo was just love sick, he was so depressed over Rosaline then apparently falls in love with Juliet when the only reason he is going to that party is to find Rosaline. He just falls in love with the next pretty girl. Right when he see's Juliet he says page 33 lines 95-98 "If I profane with my unworthiest hand this holy shrine, the gentle sin is this: My lips, two blushing pilgrims, ready stand to smooth that rough touch with a tender kiss". This shows that he was only attracted to her because of her looks, it was just teen love, they both didn't truley love each other. There are lots of different kinds of love in this world, and it can vary from person to person. We all can define love in our own way. Romeo and Juliet's story of their love is supposedly one of the greatest love stories of all time, honestly Romeo and Juliet are kind of stupid, yes they were both young especially Juliet but everyone should know not to kill themselves and not to drink a vial to fake their death. In conclusion Romeo and Juliet's love was not real or true love, rather it was all lust, and the only reason why Romeo went up to Juliet and liked her was because she was better looking then Rosaline.
Tuesday, 5 November 2013
Mid term report card
Attendance in English class has been really good. I have only missed three days all excused. One of those days I was sick and got it excused by the office, the other two days I was gone on vacation to California last week and those two days were excused as well. When I missed those days I made sure that my work was caught up and checked the class website so I know what I missed. I always come to class on time and I have never skipped. For tweeting me and my partner Ashleigh we have completed all of our tweets, for in class conversations I will try to be involved as much as I can but sometimes there isn't the opportunities. I am more of a shy person so I comment a lot on wikispaces . For the reading I always listen and pay attention. In class I always do my work and stay on task. I always behave in class and not goof around. I think the appropriate percent out of 25 for this section would be 22 percent.
So overall my mark in English class would be around 92 percent or so. I think that would be about the right grade for me in English class.
In this class I have completed every single one of the assignments and I always make sure I do them completely and not just write two sentences to get it over with. I always make sure that I get the assignments done and make sure that I do them on time. I think for my assignment completion I think 25 percent would be about right because I have completed all of the assignments and did them on time and not like a month after it was assigned.
For my writing quality on all of my assignments I would say it's pretty good. All of my assignments that I have done I have made sure that I did them the best I could and did them with my best effort. If I have missed any class or just any day I will always check the class website and look on the comments in my blog. I will always make sure I get all the assignments done to the best of my abilities and I always double check it in case if there is spelling errors, and things I can add to make it better. I think the percent for my writing quality would be about 21-22 percent or so.
In class I always do my work and stay on task. I will pretty much always complete my assignments in class unless if it's a long assignment or if I was away or sick. I would say I comment quite a bit on blogger and try to give people good advice, say good job, what I like about it, or if they need to improve something. I will always try to help any one if hey ask me, like for example the people at my table, me and Ashleigh will always ask for each others opinions and ask one another if we need help. I would say my prescence in class is good because I don't fool around, I always like to get my work done. I would say my self regulation is really good because my phone doesn't tempt me and I always pay attention and work on our assignments. I would think the appropriate percentage would be about 24.
So overall my mark in English class would be around 92 percent or so. I think that would be about the right grade for me in English class.
Friday, 1 November 2013
Soliloquy
The soliloquy I chose is in Act Four scene 3, lines 15-59.In this soliloquy Juliet is saying how god knows when her and Romeo will meet again, and how fear runs though her veins. She is contemplating if she should get the nurse to be there when she takes the vial because she's scared, but then she realizes she can't be there because no one can no and the nurse won't let her do that to herself. Then she grabs the vial but lots of thoughts are going through her head like what if the vial doesn't work at all, what if the Friar wants to kill her because how he married her and Juliet so he wouldn't get in trouble. She is also is thinking what if she awakes in the tomb before anyone arrives to get her out, and what if she runs out of air and dies in the tomb. Also if she has to lie beside Tybalt and if she goes crazy and playing with the dead bodies and if she takes one if her relatives dead bones and hits it against her head. Then she takes the vial and says" Romeo, Romeo, Romeo, here's drink! I drink to thee" which means she is drinking the vial to Romeo.
The significance this soliloquy has to the story is, this is why Romeo and Juliet die because of the vial the Friar gave her. The choice she made to drink the vial causes the confusion with the letter and makes Romeo think she is actually dead. This causes Romeo to kill himself then when Juliet wakes up she realizes Romeo is dead so she kills her self then both end up dead. This is the reason why this story is called the greatest love story of all time because they both kill themselves for each other. This is why this story is so famous because of how apparently their love conquers over death. This is the significance this soliloquy has to the story Romeo and Juliet.
Why I chose this soliloquy is because personally I think this is the most important soliloquy in the story Romeo and Juliet. This soliloquy is why this story is so famous and is called the most greatest love story of all time. I also chose this soliloquy because this is probably my least soliloquy in the play, I think Juliet is really stupid to this for Romeo only for knowing him for a few days, and how she is willing to pretend to kill her self and never see her family again and run of with Romeo. I just think that it's really stupid how she got married to him after knowing him for two days and know is willing to take the vial and was willing to kill herself. I just think its all so crazy how she is deciding and decides to take a vial to fake her death and run of with Romeo. This is why I chose this soliloquy.
Tuesday, 29 October 2013
Romeo and Juliet healthy and dysfunctional relationships
Healthy
The nurse and Juliet have a very healthy mother and daughter type relationship. The nurse cares about Juliet so much, as if she were her actual daughter. If Juliet ever has a problem she goes to the nurse for help, or if she is upset or needs someone to talk to she goes to the nurse. Juliet trusts the nurse like she was her actual mother, and the nurse has been very supportive of her loving Romeo even though she knows it's dangerous. She just wants Juliet to be happy, even if it means she is with their enemy. The nurse even helped deliver Juliet's message to Romeo for her. She had always been their for Juliet and so Juliet will always want to be there for her. After the nurse delivered the message from Juliet to Romeo, she came back to the house and delivered the message to Juliet and said "then hie you hence in Friar Lawrence's cell. There stays a husband to make you his wife". This is why the nurse and Juliet have a healthy relationship. I think there is nothing bad about their relationship as It's very healthy. Even though Juliet's mom should be doing what the nurse is doing for Juliet, it's not the case with this family, because it's very dysfunctional. The nurse has played the role of Juliet's mother ever since Juliet was born.
Unhealthy
Juliet and her parents have a very bad and unhealthy relationship . Juliet's parents are forcing Juliet who is only 13 and Paris who is an old man to get married. Juliet's dad also paired them together, all he cares about is if he's a Capulet or not, and if he has money. Juliet's parents are very superficial. Juliet doesn't love Paris, but they are going to force her to marry him anyway. They even threatened her if she didn't marry him they would kick her out of their home and protection. Juliet's parents know that she doesn't love Paris, but they don't care. Juliet doesn't even have a relationship with her mom, as the nurse is her mother figure to her. Juliet's mom is always drinking or partying somewhere and does what ever Juliet's dad tells her to do. Juliet has a very unhealthy relationship with both of her parents. The nurse is the only one that truly loves her. Juliet's own dad told her "hang thee young baggage, disobedient wretch! I tell thee what-get thee church a Thursday or never after look me in the face" which means that if she doesn't marry Paris on Thursday he will kick her out and never see her again and if that's not bad enough Juliet's mom Lady Capulet says " talk not to me, for I'll not speak a word. Do as thou wilt, for I have done with thee". Juliet's mom doesn't care for her she just said she is done and she doesn't care, she doesn't even stand up for Juliet. Therefore this is a very unhealthy relationship, and there is no good side to this very bad relationship. Juliet's parents have never been there for her, and they don't care. All they care about is themselves, partying, and how other people see them. They don't care what's best for Juliet
I think that Shakespeare would think that the most common relationship would definitely be the relationship that Juliet and the nurse have. Back in that time it was normal for rich families to have a nurse considered to be a mother figure to the children because the rich parents would be out all the time partying and socializing away from their families. They didn't really care for their own children. Nurses would be there all the time for the children because the fact their parents where never there or looked after them. I think that Shakespeare would think this because in those times it was very common for the nurses to be the mother figure, not so much the relationship Juliet has with her parents. I think that Shakespeare mostly thinks people are bad because in his story there is always fighting between the Montagues and Capulets, and Juliet had a bad relationship with her parents. Shakespeare writes a lot of tragedies and writes more about dysfunctional relationships than good ones. I don't think Shakespeare is very optimistic regarding people. Perhaps he is more of a cynic as he thinks most of the people out in the world are bad. We know this because of what he writes in his stories.
Friday, 25 October 2013
Relationship
Relationship
The nurse and Juliet have a great relationship. Their relationship is like a mother and daughter. The nurse has been with Juliet's family for at least 14 years, all of Juliet's life. Juliet is very formal when talking with her mother even calling her "Madam" but shares everything with the nurse. Getting advise and opinions from her. The nurse and Juliet are so close that she is the only one that knows Juliet is getting married and the nurse did not tell Juliet's parents. The nurse calls Juliet "Lamb" and "Ladybird" has terms of endearment.
A bad relationship is between the two families the Montague and the Capulet. They have been feuding for years. Before Romeo and Juliet were even born. They have been very verbal with their fighting. "Do you bite your thumb at us sir?" The whole town knows about their feud. They argued so much in public that they have both been warned if they fight again in public they will both be killed.
I believe that Shakespeare thinks that it is more common to be feuding or fighting then to be in a normal relationship. I feel that most of the characters in the play are not in good relationships. That he portrays dysfunctional relationships more in the play then he does healthy, normal relationships.
I believe that Shakespeare thinks that it is more common to be feuding or fighting then to be in a normal relationship. I feel that most of the characters in the play are not in good relationships. That he portrays dysfunctional relationships more in the play then he does healthy, normal relationships.
Friday, 18 October 2013
Nurses view about love
(Nurse)
My opinion of love is I don't believe that there is love at first sight and true love. I believe there is no true love or love in Verona. All the relationships are already decided by parents or family members. The people that I work for lord and lady Capulet do not have any love I'm there relationship. Lady Capulet is only with him because of his money and just does whatever he tells her to, and lord Capulet is looking at younger girls all the time. And for crying out loud Juliet is getting married to an old man chosen by her parents, this is not love at all. I have never had anyone love me, I have no family or children of my own, Juliet is the only person I've ever loved. There is even no love with the Montagues and Capulets, they are always fighting. I think there will be no love for me, and the Montagues and Capulets in Verona.
I don't know why Juliet is with Romeo a Monatgue, I am still trying to register what I saw at the party. I don't like Romeo, I don't think there is any love there, if he hurts her he is going to be very sorry.
Tuesday, 15 October 2013
Becca's interim report
So far English for this semester has been really good. In class I always do my best effort and stay on task. For my attendance I have shown up everyday to class except for one class which I was sick. I always like to get my work done and I try my best in class. I really like and enjoy this class. This has been the best English class I've ever had. I really like it how we do all our work on blogger and wiki spaces instead of pen and paper. Even though I'm not a techy person I enjoy learning how to do all this new stuff on the Internet and computers.
For my assignments so far this year, they have all gone well. I have completed all of the assignments when they were due, and I spent a lot of time on them. I didn't rush them just to get it over with. In English so far my best line that personally I think is the most meaningful is "Bullying is a really big issue everyone just needs to realize picking on others isn't cool and if you say something your scared of what people will say about or to you, everyone just needs to do the right thing and say something ". Why I think that this was the best quote I did is because bullying is a really big issue and a major topic today. It happens everyday all around us. I just think that people need to do the right thing and not care so much about what other people think.
In English I have good self regulation. Even though we're allowed to have our phones out, and we can do what we want, I know it's more important to get the class work done and not just goof around. This is like the Cookie Monster video on our class wikispaces. Even though he wants the cookies he'll wait. I'm excited for whats in store for us in English class this semester.
Wednesday, 2 October 2013
Relationship essay
Relationships, there are so many different relationships you can have, not just a love relationship. In class we looked at three poems from different authors and times. They are all to do with relationships, but each poem has a different way of showing the different relationships.
Charles Bukowski the author of the poem "How is Your Heart" never had a normal relationship and never knew what one was. He had a very bad childhood. He was beat with a razor by his dad, so he never knew how a father and son relationship should be. He never knew what a normal relationship with girls was because no girl liked him. In the second poem Walt Whitman was a bisexual in the 1800's. He was the author of "To a Stranger". I think the poem was about him imagining having a perfect relationship with someone he loves because he couldn't have one. The third poem we read was "Unentitled" by Jennifer L'hirondelle . She is a Canadian native Metis. This poem is about the relationship between her and the land. At first I thought it was just about a normal relationship, but reading through everyone's comments on wikispaces and talking about it in class, it changed my opinion.
There are some things that the three poems, "How is our heart", "To a Stranger" and "Unentitled" have in common. They are all to do with relationships, either with people or land. They also talk about certain relationships for themselves because everyone has different relationships or views them differently from others. All three authors had or have different lives, They all had different childhoods, and all were raised differently and so had different backgrounds. For each of them their lives were shaped by how they were raised and the childhoods they had. People don't know what a normal relationship is if they don't see that for example with family, or if they haven't had one themselves. Each of the pieces are very different from the other. They all have different messages, but they are all on relationships.
The poems "How is Your Heart", "To a Stranger", and "Unentitled", all have similarities with teenagers and their relationships that they have today. Wether it's with their family, friends, or people they like. There are some similarities with all of the poems. "How is Your Heart" by Charles Bukowski can relate to relationships with teenagers today. Maybe not to the extent that his life was, but teenagers can relate to the struggles that he had and wrote about in his poem. Some teenagers don't have any homes and may have to sleep on park benches. Some teenagers can get into trouble and end up in jail. Teenagers can also have troubles with relationships they have. This is how that the poem "How is Your Heart" can relate to relationships with teenagers today.the poem "To a Stranger" by Walt Whitman can relate to relationships with teenagers today because mostly everyone imagines or dreams about having a relationship with someone they like or love. The poem "Unentitled" by Jennifer L'hirondelle can relate to relationships with teenagers because teenagers need a place of peace, somewhere that's quiet or that they feel that they have a connection with. Lots of teenagers can relate to this for example by going to the ocean, or hiking in the wilderness. This is how all three if the poems we did in class can be connected to relationships with teenagers today.
These poems fit into our Relationship theme because even though the three poems are all very different from one another, they have very different messages, and talk about different things, but they are all about relationships. So even though they are completely different they all talk about different relationships people and teenagers can have. Our theme is relationships not just about love relationships, but each and every type of relationship you can have. That's how the there poems fit into our theme about Relationships.
Wednesday, 11 September 2013
Being a teenager
For me being a teenager is pretty good. It all depends though because it can vary for different people. I really like high school and going to different classes and having different teachers. Also having a locker is pretty cool. You also have lots more freedom but some take advantage of that. When your a teenager you have lots of decisions to make,and you can sometimes end up in the wrong crowd. It's your responsibility to make the right choice. For me I go to school to learn, not to goof around. Also the sports are much more awesome and competitive when your a teenager. High school can be so much fun it just depends what you choose to do. It all depends on what you do with the freedom you have. High school can be tough because there will always be mean people out there and you just have to stick up for yourself and if you see anyone getting picked on you need to say something don't be a by stander it's very wrong to see some one getting picked on and not doing anything about it. There will always be mean and bad people where ever you go. You just need to stick up for your self and stick up for others. Bullying is a really big issue everyone just needs to realize picking on others is not cool and if you say something your scared of what people will say about or to you, everyone just needs to do the right thing and say something. I love being a teenager and for me for the grades and classes its really good , my parents are just happy with my best they don't care it its am A B or C just as long as its my best.I know that high school can be tough for people because there parents are like you have to get straight As but I'm just really blessed to have the parents that I have that's why for me being a teenager is good because I have awesome parents who are really understanding and care for me.
Friday, 6 September 2013
The Mistake
I started my career as a spy at the age of 14 when I was at a track meet when the Boss of international spy's association spotted me then from there I was recruited as a spy. I watch people most days of the week . I have been investigating some pretty dangerous stuff. There is this evil scientist who lives in my neighbourhood who has been up to some stuff lately. We've spotted him coming out of hardware store with some suspicious tools, so I was assigned to watch him. When I was watching him he was making a special formula that makes the person who drinks it make them black out for a long time. I heard him say in an evil laugh " I'm going to take over the International spy's association and take over the world".His plan was to slip the formula into his drink. If he drinks it he will black out for enough time for him to take over . I had to stop him I couldn't let this happen. I was told if I saw any stuff going on I had to report to the boss, but I thought there wasn't enough time so I decided to take matters into my own hands.I went back to my house to get my gear then my mom caught me when I walked through the door, she told me I was grounded for being out so long without telling her so I had to go to my room.
When I got to my room I made the mistake of going out that window after that scientist, I should of know he was out of my league. But I did it any way, it was a sign that when my mom told me when I was grounded and to stay in my room. I really wish I just would have stayed. I climbed out the window and went to the evil scientists house and a huge cage came down and caught me. It landed on my leg, I was screaming so loud it was excruciating pain.He laughed at me and said "you and your spy association is going to be done for good".He went to our secret headquarters where the boss was and posed as the mail man when he wasn't looking he slipped it into his coffee and blacked out. He was able to take over the entire association by making all he spy's his personal prisoners and slaves and now worst of all I am a prisoner of his and have to work for the Evil Spy's association. Now he has taken over the world with the help of his evil spy's.Now the whole world is under his control but we aren't going to take this . I am coming up with a secret plan to take him down and all the others spy's are in on it. We will take over, and bring good back to the world.
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