When I got to my room I made the mistake of going out that window after that scientist, I should of know he was out of my league. But I did it any way, it was a sign that when my mom told me when I was grounded and to stay in my room. I really wish I just would have stayed. I climbed out the window and went to the evil scientists house and a huge cage came down and caught me. It landed on my leg, I was screaming so loud it was excruciating pain.He laughed at me and said "you and your spy association is going to be done for good".He went to our secret headquarters where the boss was and posed as the mail man when he wasn't looking he slipped it into his coffee and blacked out. He was able to take over the entire association by making all he spy's his personal prisoners and slaves and now worst of all I am a prisoner of his and have to work for the Evil Spy's association. Now he has taken over the world with the help of his evil spy's.Now the whole world is under his control but we aren't going to take this . I am coming up with a secret plan to take him down and all the others spy's are in on it. We will take over, and bring good back to the world.
Friday, 6 September 2013
The Mistake
I started my career as a spy at the age of 14 when I was at a track meet when the Boss of international spy's association spotted me then from there I was recruited as a spy. I watch people most days of the week . I have been investigating some pretty dangerous stuff. There is this evil scientist who lives in my neighbourhood who has been up to some stuff lately. We've spotted him coming out of hardware store with some suspicious tools, so I was assigned to watch him. When I was watching him he was making a special formula that makes the person who drinks it make them black out for a long time. I heard him say in an evil laugh " I'm going to take over the International spy's association and take over the world".His plan was to slip the formula into his drink. If he drinks it he will black out for enough time for him to take over . I had to stop him I couldn't let this happen. I was told if I saw any stuff going on I had to report to the boss, but I thought there wasn't enough time so I decided to take matters into my own hands.I went back to my house to get my gear then my mom caught me when I walked through the door, she told me I was grounded for being out so long without telling her so I had to go to my room.
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Your story was very good. You had a great idea.
ReplyDeleteTo bad you did not stop him.
I love your introductory sentence and how you made a 14 year old an international spy. But I think the story cloud have used some more paragraphs. Besides that I love your story, like a lot! :)
ReplyDeleteThe beginning of the story really drawed my attention and the ending leaves you being curious, gooodjob!
ReplyDeletegood story :) now i really want to know whats going to happen next.
ReplyDeleteGood job the story draws you in and the ideas make you want to read more. Really good job
ReplyDeletei like the whole concept of your story but it was hard for me to grasp what was going on in the middle of the story. Maybe add some paragraphs :)
ReplyDeleteYour introduction was really good, it makes you want to read more!
ReplyDeleteThanks guys for all your comments!:)
ReplyDeleteThanks guys for all your comments!:)
ReplyDeleteYour story was vert interesting to read the beginning made me go further and further into the story to find out everything else!
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